Welcome to the Pitch Critique Session!

If you don’t know yet, we’ll be taking 35-words pitches today and critiquing them, in order to improve them for the awesome New Adult Pitch Contest YAtopia is hosting next week, with agent Sara Megibow and editor Heather Howland (from Entangled Publishing).

All you have to do is to post your 35-words NEW ADULT pitch on comments bellow (with title and genre) and critique three other pitches. The NA sisters and YAtopia contributors will reply with suggestions on how to improve them. As our special guest, the lovely NA author Lynn Rush will help us.

And ...GO!