Hey Hey everyone!



Today is our critique session. We have an Alley in the Agent Pitch Contest coming up this Wednesday with agent Vickie Motter (don't forget!) so we wanted to take today and give you the option to get some feedback from us and Alley readers on your pitch.

For details on the event, click here. Your MS must be complete and polished for this contest, and of course that means the entire MS, but we also all know how important those first words are. After all, those first words need to be perfect and polished if you want the rest of your cleaned and polished manuscript to be seen. 

So if you would like some feedback, please post the following in the comments:

  • Name:
  • Email:
  • Title:
  • Genre:
  • Word Count:
  • Twitter style pitch (140 characters):
  • First 200 Words:

Please note that the twitter style pitch is 140 characters, not 140 words.  And just to clarify, this critique session is for today only. 

If you would only like feedback on your pitch or first 200 words, feel free to post whichever section you would like feedback on.



Happy posting